3.If Is attacks Taiwan,I will attacks them with our soldiers because I want to protect our country and don't lead our country to be ruined. 李彥 吳宇翔 吳沛霖第四組
You "will be " panic because .... (correct it, please.) we will face (not faced) 助V. +V.... Everyone will die, but how can we do to protect our country from threatening. That is the first priority. 75
If IS attacks Taiwan. I will seek the help of other countries because a country is not strong enough. If is attacks Taiwan. I will join the army because I can try my best After I watched the film, I feel anger because some big country didn't join revolt IS I feel sad because lots of people dead Pray for Paris I feel very sorry because they are so innocent I feel very sad because they dead many people for no reason
1.After I watched the film I feel angry because they were caught by IS. I feel sad because they have psychopathy. (第2組 5號湯鎮 8號曾俊維) 3.If IS attacks Taiwan, I will tell denfense department because they have something strong. I will sad a lot,protect myself and others because we must be brave to live. (第2組 22號龔郁芸 17王竣楷)
If IS attacks Taiwan, I will cherish every moment with my family because I don't know when they will disappear. I will sacrifice myself because I don't want to see others dying. (第六組 34陳姸榕 21莊珈瑜)
After I watched film.
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第四組 40、37
I want to know if they come to Taiwan what you will do. But you don't tell me.
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Pray for Paris.
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I feel very sad because innocent people were gone.
第二組 30、33
I believe you will learn something after reading this essay. Can you show me what you want to do or how to do it?
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Pray for Paris.
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I feel very sorry because we faced with this thing can not do anything.
第四組 27 31
Are you sure you cannot do anything? You can ask your friends and family to notice this news and tell them how you feel, cannot you?
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3.If Is attacks Taiwan,I will attacks them with our soldiers because I want to protect our country and don't lead our country to be ruined.
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Yes, it is good. I like it.
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If IS attacks Taiwan,
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I will nervous because we will faced with death.
第5組24 32
You "will be " panic because .... (correct it, please.)
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Everyone will die, but how can we do to protect our country from threatening. That is the first priority.
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If IS attacks Taiwan. I will seek the help of other countries because a country is not
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If is attacks Taiwan. I will join the army because I can try my best
After I watched the film,
I feel anger because some big country didn't join revolt IS
I feel sad because lots of people dead
Pray for Paris
I feel very sorry because they are so innocent
I feel very sad because they dead many people for no reason
5組 14、12
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I feel cruel because they no scruple of committing murder.
1.After I watched the film
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I feel sad because they have psychopathy.
(第2組 5號湯鎮 8號曾俊維)
3.If IS attacks Taiwan,
I will tell denfense department because they have something strong.
I will sad a lot,protect myself and others because we must be brave to live.
(第2組 22號龔郁芸 17王竣楷)
If IS attacks Taiwan,
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I will sacrifice myself because I don't want to see others dying.
(第六組 34陳姸榕 21莊珈瑜)
Pray for Paris.
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I feel sad because innocent lifes died.
第五組 25 、26
第3題，If IS attack Taiwan,I will attack them with my friend by internet because Ihate them.
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Pray for Paris
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I feel sad because they kill innocent people.
第六組23古郁綺19歐德宇
Pray for Paris
回覆刪除I feel sorry because they make France getting panic.
I feel sad because they kill innocent people.
第六組23古郁綺19歐德宇
I feel sad because they was killed by Is.
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第六組王譯佩39謝凱鈞11
because they "were" (not was) killed by Is.
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You must be careful about these language errors.
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